Friday, February 8, 2013

Joker One (Week Three)

           When we last had an update for Joker One, the team was taking heavy fire while driving through the desert.This week, they attack an insurgent hotel. They get pinned down for a few hours shooting through the windows and blown up walls of the hotel. Joker goes on a mission the next day to a small home, Joker watches over soldiers from a distance clear the building when they call an a cobra gunship to clear it out and are told to deploy smoke for friendly targets. Joker uses his, but the second squad doesn't have enough time and is getting shot at in the building by two cobra's. they all make it out alive, barely, but one of the soldiers falls from dehydration and Joker makes a daring attempt to save him by running through the streets while mounted machine guns fire at them. No one in Joker was killed in either firefight.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Connor, this is great entry. Everything is great. I just feel like the sentences are a little short which makes it feel edgy. However, make sure you check if Mrs. S made directions for the week's blog entries. This week was supposed to focus on setting. I think what you wrote is more of a summary and it doesn't quite mention the setting. Be careful next time!

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